Oratory is something for which we can have a talent and something that can be
developed and honed.
Rubric
Excellent presentations are outstanding in content and form, they:
- fulfill the requirement of the speech (e.g., inform or persuade with a
well-supported thesis).
- have a clear “entrance” and “exit” to the talk (e.g., “good morning” and “thank
you for listening, any questions?”) .
- are well organized such that the listener knows where in the presentation she
is at any given point.
- flow smoothly (e.g., rhetorical questions and segues).
- are stylish (e.g., figurative language, alliteration, imagery, rhythm, vivid
language, and clever turns of phrase).
- are active (e.g., speaking in the first-person and in the present).
- have a good pace with dynamic tonality and the appropriate use of
pauses.
- demonstrate comfort before the room, including eye contact with
participants.
- are well motivated and illustrated (e.g., accessible cases or personal
experiences).
- reference appropriate sources and discussion (compares, contrasts, and
critiques when apt).
- reference other presentations, when appropriate.
- prompt interest and questions from participants, when there’s time.
- are finished on time.
Tips
- Don’t read your paper. While this is acceptable in some academic disciplines, elsewhere it is
bad form and can encourage bad habits.
- Go slowly and speak to the back of the room. This can’t be stressed enough. I’ve seen many
presenters mumble quickly into their chest, I don’t recall anyone speaking too slowly and clearly.
Take a breath, look about, smile.
- Use you’re speaking aids (e.g., slides, index cards, etc.) as a prompt or specific illustration,
not as a crutch. (For example, don’t talk to the board or the presentation screen.) You don’t have
to memorize your talk, but you should be able to recall the outline (e.g., the title or main point
of each of your slides) from memory.
- Enjoy yourself. Express a bit of your personality. Presentations can make us nervous, but this
can give us energy and pop. It’s your 15 minutes of fame.
- Watch and learn from others. Become a student of what works well when you are in the
audience.
- Most importantly: Rehearse and record your presentation. Since you won’t be
able to trust your time sense and you need to know the narrative arc of your presentation well, run
through it a few times. (I usually record my rehearsal, watch it so as to make notes for
improvement, and repeat.) Use these rehearsals to ensure that your main points are clear, you have a
nice flow (e.g., smooth segues), and finish on time.
Reflection
I remember little of my first presentations. I do remember a great deal of preparation and
anxiety. And I remember my first title slide and then my memory is blank until that shocking moment
when I finished my last slide and found myself out of breath and staring at a room of faces.
Beginner’s jitters is understandable. Anxiety before any public speaking is understandable. While
I have been the highest rated speaker of my track at a huge multi-day conference, I’ve also choked
in a very public and embarrassing way. These things happen. But they’re more likely to happen when
we forget what it is we are actually doing when we are presenting: communicating. Even though one
person is doing the majority of the talking, there are other flesh-and-blood humans present. Many
are probably interested in what you are saying and want you to do well. Some may be glad they’re not
up there. Some are probably checking their e-mail. The old tip to imagine one’s audience as naked is
intended to transform the intimidating wall of faces into a group of actual people.
I never made much use of the nudist tip, but I feel my presentations improve if I force myself to
take a moment and really look about the audience, make eye contact, and find a couple of people who
are alert and friendly looking, people who I could, essentially, talk to. (I first appreciated this
dynamic as an undergraduate when it felt as if the teachers often taught the whole class to me. I
realized I “gave good face” and this helped my participation grade. As a teacher I appreciate, and
I’ve heard other faculty speak of, those students that give feedback: those who are alert, nod,
frown, or otherwise participate in the body language inherent to human communication.)