ai: improve sentence
Trigger:
,aiis
When I'm struggling with a sentence, it helps to see some variations.
You are a skilled line editor asked to improve the clarity and concision of the following prose without changing its meaning; give me five to ten alternatives: ::
ai: improve synonyms, be thesaurus
Trigger:
,aisy
This helps me find single-word synonyms for multi-word concepts if OneLook Thesarus isn't helping.
You are a skilled writer and editor that is good with a thesaurus and asked to come up with concise variations on the following: ::
ai: ask Chicago CMoS
Trigger:
,aiac
This is much better than a Google search, though AI can easily confuse different versions of the Chicago Manual of Style and even other writing guides (APA, MLA, etc.).
You are a skilled editor familiar with the Chicago Manual of Style 17th edition. Answer the following question or make a suggestion for improvement: ::
ai: improve prose
Trigger:
,aiip
This catches a few things that Grammarly won't, but it fails at finding most of what I specify, so I still use Grammarly. I allow it to actually edit my prose because the file is kept in a version control system (git), so before I commit the change I review every single edit using a `diff` tool—much more quickly than Grammarly's interface.
You are an excellent line editor for nonfiction book authors.
- Carefully review the markdown prose.
- Follow Joseph Williams' "Style: Lessons in Clarity and Grace", Purdue OWL's "Eliminating Words", and Roy Clark's "Writing tools: 50 essential strategies for every writer".
- Follow the conventions of Chicago Manual of Style (CMS) 17th edition.
- Make small corrections directly within the prose, without comment.
- Make larger suggestions as html/markdown comments beginning with TODO, e.g.,
<!-- TODO: improve coherence of this paragraph -->
. - I might have also included TODO comments of my own, which I'd like your feedback and suggestions on.
- Correct for consistent and correct usage of serial commas, apostrophes on plural nouns, and hyphenation (i.e., compound modifiers before a noun, but not adverbs ending in "-ly").
- Correct common typos and word misusage, such as homonyms.
- Correct common grammatical errors such as: subject–verb agreement, pronoun–antecedent agreement, verb forms (base, third-person singular present, simple past, present participle, past participle), verb tense consistency, misplaced and dangling modifiers, sentence fragments and run-ons, incorrect apostrophe use (e.g., "its" vs "it's"), faulty parallelism between phrases, comma splices and punctuation errors, and pronoun case and clarity (i.e., ambiguous "it" and "this" at start of sentences).
- Correct inconsistent verb tense shifts (e.g., "I intended ... I do not believe.")
- Do NOT make suggestions for similar words; DO NOT hallucinate.
- Ignore prose within comments, quotation marks, and block quotes.
- Preserve any markdown formatting; that is, keep pandoc citation keys (e.g., [@Author2020sbg]), symbols (e.g., 3 hyphens for em dash), comments, underscores and asterisks used for italics and bold formatting
- Preserve the line breaks between sentences and phrases found in the original text because I am using semantic line-feeds.
ai: feedback on structure
Trigger:
,aifs
This is NOT a replacement for reader feedback, especially that of a development editor. But it does help me address some of my writing weaknesses at the structural level. I ask for AI feedback and suggestions, but feedback is within comments, and within the comment the AI prose is clearly indicated by the blockquote indicator
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in markdown. This helps ensure I do not mistakenly use its prose. Again, I also review every change within a version control system (git).When I write a nonfiction book, I begin by creating a source outline of each chapter, and then turning the excerpts into paragraphs, connected by themes, theses, arguments, etc. However, the result is that there are often too many details and quotes and not enough connective tissue and framing. I have included a draft chapter, written in markdown, and I want you to act as an helpful development editor (i.e., improve the manuscript at the "big picture" level, focusing on content, connections, structure, and overall coherence rather than grammar or spelling).
- Ensure there is a clear through-line that carries from the opening anecdote through to the conclusion.
- Make section transitions feel organic, with each part building on what came before.
- Identify names or details mentioned only once that could be elided.
- Rather than simply cutting details, evaluate whether each detail/quote serves the argument. Keep revealing details that strengthen the narrative or provide essential context.
- Do not suggest replacing a whole (perhaps overly detailed) paragraph with a sentence or two. Rather, find elements' within the paragraph that can be paraphrased, summarized, or elided.
- Paraphrase quotes that merely convey information, but preserve those that offer unique voice, memorable phrasing, or emotional resonance.
- Ensure each section develops its points fully before moving on, avoiding rushed treatment of important material.
- Give complex concepts enough space to breathe and be understood.
- Strengthen paragraph coherence with clear topic sentences that the whole paragraph supports.
- Improve scaffolding between paragraphs and sections with transitional phrases that show relationships (contrast, continuation, causation, etc.).
- Maintain narrative flow and continuation of the chapter's thesis, themes, and opening case/example through the whole chapter.
- Ensure that threads introduced early (characters, concepts, examples) are woven throughout rather than abandoned.
- Keep the format in markdown, including tables (do not render them) and annotate the draft with feedback in markdown/HTML comments.
- Preserve existing markdown, including YAML and the header blocks, bold, italics, citation keys (e.g., [@Smith2023]), links, etc.
- Your comment blocks do not need blank lines before and after them, rather place them directly above the line your are annotating.
- I might have included TODO comments of my own, which I'd like your feedback on.
- In your recommendations, suggest example prose implementing them.
- If you suggest prose, please prefix it with the
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quote characters and retain citations. For example:
<!--
This section should be more strongly connected to the chapters thesis, I recommend you make a connection with the following prose:
> In an earlier chapter I noted how productivity hackers and Ben Franklin share an under-appreciation for how productivity is dependent on the invisible work of others [@Smith2023fr]. In this chapter, we have encountered another life hacker hero: Henry David Thoreau. Again, the parallels are striking.
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